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1. dangiankit August 28, 2009 at 7:34 AM
   Very well conceptualized Amrish. Hope you've seen Firaaq.
   
   P.S. The camera seems to be shaking when presenting the state after the scare. Time seq: 4:00 to 4:17. Just see, if you can work on this.
2. Atra Tatra Sarvatra September 2, 2009 at 6:12 PM
   Hey Amrish - Sensitive subject, well touched, nice background score. Liked the real life situations and locations. However, abrupt camera movements in between need to be worked on. Noise smoothing/filtering might enhance the background score. Also, dialogues could have been more intense for the given subject to create the impact. Overall, a sincere effort with room for improvement.
   
   Good Luck!
   Deepti
3. Unknown November 17, 2010 at 1:27 PM
   I was rendered Spellbound & mesmerised; in the entire span of 6mins n 2 secs..then suddenly some soothing tune at the rise of the 3rd sec woke me...
   
   I consider myself totally inept to comment on the technicalities but I would like to salute you to have the nerve to address such a delicate matter on a platform like this and also managing to do balanced justice to the soul of the plot and the sentiments of the characters potrayed.
   
   Personally, I believe the strongest aspect of this play were its gestures and the unwords - as someone puts it "Silence is the most powerful expression language" - its proven here.Human emotions reached my soul (as a layman) and the background number which was being played in that restaurant said it all (very well elected)..it added glitter to the gold.
   
   In the final shot a strong emotion of cupability and self remorse was reflecting from the lead's eyes and that like some poultice managed to heal the wound of antagonism.
   
   Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece of artwork. Hope to see some more soon
   
   Reena

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