Ruin

By Amrish
what if jealousy turns into obsession ??


 

2 comments so far.

  1. Morphean September 5, 2008 at 9:07 PM
    Great stuff man. Good use of lighting and camera angles. Only improvement area cud be the narration. It lacked the variation. Otherwise all set to become a good filmmaker ...dude :-)

    ~ sriram
  2. Shuvo. September 6, 2008 at 6:34 AM
    Hey! Good job!

    A better plot, and yes, better narration, as all hv been telling...n u wd b bang on!!

    Storytelling, and camera are good! (the last falling shot could hv been slightly better)

    Keep up!

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